Revision Process
I want to address the mechanical issues in my literature review. To do so, I need to cite and synthesize my sources properly, format my APA citations correctly, and rearrange some of my content into more appropriate sections. I also want to reread my sources to ensure that my claims align with what has already been said. I deviated from the requirements because I tried to explain my interpretations instead of properly acknowledging the available sources. I did an excellent job of informing and bringing to light relevant points, but the review was a discovery process. I needed to differentiate between a typical research paper and a lit review, which takes experience and learning. I am planning to rewrite the review before incorporating it into the proposal.